Critique
I tried to illustrate what I mean, but I’m starting to wonder if maybe the problem is that the helmet doesn’t come down far enough. However, if you compare the lines drawn, you’ll see that section (1) and section (2) are not equal on Harpuia. The arm thing I tried to illustrate here. The elbows should be level unless the right shoulder (his right) is tipped down. Alternately, if the right arm is forward more than the left, the right elbow would be slightly higher than the left.
The Code Lyoko thing was mainly just an exercise to make yourself more aware of the forehead when you draw. It’s not an example of perfection for sure, but I found that it helped me when I was going through this phase. I just figured I would suggest it in case you were interested, that’s all.
Anyway, I really like this picture a lot! I just figured I’d try to give you some tips because you were kind enough to critique that picture of Aeolus I did quite a ways back :)
Long post, under a cut
